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Comment on Kalidas Festival 2011 by swatisani

swatisani — Fri, 30 Mar 2012 13:03:46 +0000

Perhaps.. correcting. Thanks

Comment on मेरा नया बचपन by Sudipta Das

Sudipta Das — Thu, 29 Mar 2012 18:42:32 +0000

this is oen of the best I’ve read on chilhoood..

Swati…putting here one of my own ‘Abhilasha’ on a child’s imagination on unadulterated childhood and a mockery on so called elite and ‘educated’ class. I hope you can go through at your leisure. It’s posted on my blog as well.

Koi kahe ‘yeh aisa hota’
koi kahe ‘yeh waisa’
koi na kahe par……….
ja ban ja woh
khud chahe tu jaisa

kya hota jo kabhi iss..
badal ke paron par
thodi saans main phoonkta
chand sitaron ke aage
khule aasman ka
chakkar kabhi ek lagata
wajah na dhoondta har wajah ki
sirf bann jata woh
khud chahoon main jaisa

kash kabhi na padhta
iss uljhan mein
subah ka suraj laal sindoori
sharmsaar kyun samandar ke
panah se nikalta…
ubalta yeh dariya kyun
sar chumta aasman sawnla
yeh jab bhi rota
rang kyun hai damagon ke liye
khusboo kyun na koi dekh pata
gar yeh na sochta to
phool gulab ka na hota?

aisa kya hota jo main
‘yeh’ ‘woh’ jaisa
sawalon ki yeh guthhi suljhata
kaun hai duniya mein peer payambar
raam ya rahim
kaun hain jag ke rehbar?

kaash in soch samajhwalon ko
thodi nadani main de pata
aisi khudai na sahi
kuch insaaniyat bach jaata

duniyadari ki yeh baatein kahkar
kya ban jaata bada in sab jaisa?
aisa kya hota jo
do char padh main bhi
ban jaata in sab jaisa?

koi kahe na kahe, ab
ban jaoon woh
khud chahoon main jaisa||

Comment on Kalidas Festival 2011 by Sudipta Das

Sudipta Das — Thu, 29 Mar 2012 18:31:03 +0000

kal ki raat giri thi shabnam…Gulzar’s creation from ‘Pukhraj’.

जैसे अपने नाज़ुक पंखों पर
आकाश को तोड़ रही हों……. I think it is ‘tol’ rahi ho…could be a typo…
nice read though; this is also a nice space

Comment on तू अपने जैसा अछूता खयाल दे मुझको by Sudipta

Sudipta — Thu, 29 Mar 2012 13:16:16 +0000

Yes, looks interesting; I will go through all the writings.

Comment on तू अपने जैसा अछूता खयाल दे मुझको by swatisani

swatisani — Thu, 29 Mar 2012 12:56:20 +0000

You’d perhaps enjoy her site http://zarinasani.org too.

Comment on तू अपने जैसा अछूता खयाल दे मुझको by Sudipta

Sudipta — Thu, 29 Mar 2012 12:06:17 +0000

aha….an amazing person..paak ehsaasein na mard hote hain na aurat

reflects on her writing

Comment on तू अपने जैसा अछूता खयाल दे मुझको by swatisani

swatisani — Thu, 29 Mar 2012 11:58:31 +0000

Thank you, Sudipta. She was an amazing woman.

Comment on तू अपने जैसा अछूता खयाल दे मुझको by Sudipta

Sudipta — Thu, 29 Mar 2012 11:32:36 +0000

dedicated to her…

kaise bahta hai khole apni bahein tu sikha mujhko
main baadbani hoon teri, ek samandar hawa de mujhko

Comment on मायाजाल by Sudipta

Sudipta — Thu, 29 Mar 2012 11:21:56 +0000

this is astounding!!

Comment on होली का चाँद by Sudipta

Sudipta — Thu, 29 Mar 2012 10:59:34 +0000

nice….

chand aur huzum (collection of stars),
barati mein bin bulaye suraj mehmaan…
ek raat is se aage bhi koi baat chale…..

some stray thoughts that cannot be parked…